远山近描课件

The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 小桔灯快速阶梯作文（实战篇）远山近描法 The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 第一站：手提桔灯—转转转胸有成竹 The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 第二站：点亮桔灯—闪闪闪奇思妙想——想一想感悟生命 The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 概念：在写作技巧中，指在面对宏大、难于把握的作文题目时，善于从中寻到一个小巧的、易于切入话题的突破口，从小题材中挖掘出深刻的、闪光的思想，从而达到以小题材反映大主题的目的。远山近描法（话题作文）作用：使我们在面对大的话题时有话可谈，有事可写，从而轻松驾驭。 http://www.xjdpx.com 当习作的话题过于宽泛，以至于找不到切入点时，可以对话题加以限制，舍大取小将话题限定在一定范围内，这样可以避免漫无目的瞎谈，使它落在实处，易于被我们把握。《温暖》母爱的温暖一盆炉火的温暖温暖是你看我时的眼神 …… The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 远山近描法第一招——限制话题法基本方法： The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 从小处着手，尽量选择那些易于被人忽视、看似平凡的事物，将故事情节细化、具体化，一样可以展现大的主题《温暖》抱孩子的少妇让人感觉温暖掏鸟窝又送回小鸟的男孩让人感觉温暖摇着蒲扇讲故事的老人让人感觉温暖团圆的佳节让远方的游子感觉温暖 …… The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 远山近描法第一招——限制话题法远山近描法第二招——细化情节法远山近描法第三招——分割结构法基本方法：故事A：自己就是最大的财富故事B：《心灵比拼》故事大派送：轻松一刻 http://www.xjdpx.com 注意：一、尽量化大为小，大题小做，忌不着边际，泛泛而谈。二、要细化情节，使内容具体生动。 The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 第三站：桔灯引路—碰碰碰复习远山近描法：（1）什么叫远山近描法？（2）在什么状况下使用远山近描法？这样做有什么好处？（3）远山近描法一般可以运用到哪些方法？（4）在使用远山近描法的时候一般要注意什么？赏析范文《在阳光下成长》（A册P125）（1）同学们，假如你拿到一个有关“阳光”的话题，你会怎么构思呢？（2）作者在运用远山近描法进行构思时，是怎样对话题加以限制的？（3）作者塑造了什么样的故事情节？这个情节具体生动吗？（4）通过种花籽的故事，文章反映了什么样的主题？赏析范文《兰花露出的笑脸》（B册P109）（1）学生自读范文《兰花露出的笑脸》，边读边圈出文章中的好词佳句以及不懂的地方。（2）好词：绽放、娇羞、绚烂、芬芳四溢、心旷神怡、小心翼翼、灿烂、笑靥纯真…… （3）你为什么喜欢这些句子呢？第四站：桔园飘香——乐乐乐口头冲浪——比一比话题 “我” “月亮” “ 风景” The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee. 我有妙笔——写一写 1.题目：阳光既是自然资源，又是文明的象征，它象征关怀，象征温情，象征奉献……请以“阳光”为话题写一篇文章，题目自拟，不少于450字。 2.以“幸福”为话题写一篇作文，不少于400 字。第五站：摘桔收果—笑笑笑（1）初步自评：学生自评习作，边读边改。（2）老师和学生一起品赏：朗读有代表性的两篇文章，和学生一起逐段逐段分析、点评。（3）学生分组互改。（4）再次自改作文。（5）老师检查、评改。 The guiding ideology should be guided by Deng Xiaoping s theory, the important thought of “three represents“ and the spirit of the 16th CPC National Congress and the third Plenary session of the 16th CPC Central Committee.